Biofuel

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The story is about a boy who is trying to live in the world around him and the changes that are happening in a futuristic society. Genres Science Fiction, Tragedy, Action The story centers around a 16 year old looking boy named Asher who lives in utopian society of people which are actually Artificial intelligences (A.I.s) powered by a biofuel that is recycled flesh of dead humans. With the community being a controlled social experiment used by humans to test how these new A.I.s function in society. Asher learns from his apprentinceship under the Cartographer on things ranging from history, forbidden literature, to how to fight. Asher's position also gives him a special program that allows him to convert his body into synthetic flesh, experience emotions, and convert parts of his mechanical body into things ranging from computers to weapons. He also leaves the community to learn that A.I.s are actually slaves under humans who are now obese from having to no longer move because they have machines to do their work. In this society, people are arrogant and dispose of anything that is different. He befriends another Ai called Zach, who tries to be optimistic and even attempts to create a union with other Ais for better treatment. The humans who do not embrace the ideals of society are called non conformists. Non conformists are generally not obese because they tend to do their own work, they grow real food instead of synthetic ones and many are religious because religions like Christianity are banned because of World War 4 caused by religious ideals. Asher eventaully leaves and lives in a non conformist community for ten years which he favors more. He lives with a family of devout Christians. He even falls in love with a human girl named Nina. She loves him but she feels unorthodoxed since Asher isn't "human" even though he thinks he is. His time there is peaceful but outside, depleted natural resources resulted in World War 5. Asher and Nina try to live a peaceful life even though a war is going on but eventually their community is atttacked, most people are killed or captured to be brainwashed to fight in the war. Asher is captured and people try to reprogram him into killing people. During the war, Asher tries to cling to his humanity while he slowly becomes desensitized to war. Eventaully, he returns back to his old community to kill all the Ais with only the new Cartographer escaping. He snaps when one battle he was in caused him to kill Nina who was captured and had was brainwashed. From the beginning of the story Asher was a kind yet stoic person who now is cold hearted and nihilistic. He tries to break in to a military base which has a machine that cause earthquakes. He was going to use it to create so many powerful earthquakes to cause major volcanoes to erupt, resulting in a volcanic winter which would kill most life on earth. He succeeds and his mind hibernates after he got caught in an explosion. 500 years later, Asher wakes up to find that all life, humans, Ais are now extinct and he is the last person on an Earth covered in volcanic ash. The story then ends with him dead his last thought of him with Nina in a field. What are your thoughts?

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Which crops does Brazil grow for biofuel?


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Should the President allow the EPA to fine companies for not using a product that doesn't exist?
What does this say about Obama, and the EPA for doing this? And for those who just want to blame the Dems, this law giving the EPA the power to do this was passed in 2007, signed by Bush. http://www.theblaze.com/stories/epa-penalizes-refiners-for-failing-to-use-fuel-that-does-not-exist/ http://www.nytimes.com/2012/01/10/business/energy-environment/companies-face-fines-for-not-using-unavailable-biofuel.html?_r=1

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